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Stoned Love

CarnivaL

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All dried up, going through days without shades
And nights with no warmth.

The routine was melancholy once,
With you next to me, under the big oak tree.

In the grass, with birds singing and dancing around us,
To the music of the river, few meters away.

Good old days flashing by, breaking me
and making me, with the hope to regain everything.

Excited you were, knowing about the new boathouse.
People started coming to our place with papers and plans.

One of those days was the tragic incident.
Some guy walked to us, bent down and picked u.
You are beautiful, even he knew.

I was crying out loud to put u down.
“She is my universe, let her down”, I cried.
I am just a stone and he is an all-powerful human.
He couldn’t hear my cry for you.

You are thrown into the river, I saw the water splashing,
As you went down into a new world,
my whole world started shaking.

First, they cut down the tree. The birds stopped coming.
Then they poured concrete, kicking me aside.
Whole world changed here without you.

Lying alone in a small patch of sand,
Waiting for the next human hand.
 
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CarnivaL

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All dried up, going through days without shades
And nights with no warmth.

The routine was melancholy once,
With you next to me, under the big oak tree.

In the grass, with birds singing and dancing around us,
To the music of the river, few meters away.

Good old days flashing, breaking me,
And making me, with the hope to get back all.

Excited you were, knowing about the new boathouse.
People started coming to our place with papers and plans.

One of those days, was the tragic incident.
Some guy walked to us, bent down and picked u.
You are beautiful, even he knew.

I was crying out loud to put u down.
“She is my universe, let her down”, I cried.
I am just a stone and he is the all powerful human.
He couldn’t hear my cry for you.

You are thrown into the river, I saw the water splashing,
As you went into a whole new world,
My world started shaking.

First they cut down the tree, the birds stopped coming.
Then they poured concrete kicking me aside.
Whole world changed here without you.

Lying alone in the small ground of sand,
Waiting for the next human hand.
Romba lengthya ezhudhitomo
 

CarnivaL

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Human hands makes and breaks stoned loves while God's hand plays with our love stories..😝😝😝


Ayooo kavidhaiyaa kotudhaey😂😂
 

Phoenix

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All dried up, going through days without shades
And nights with no warmth.

The routine was melancholy once,
With you next to me, under the big oak tree.

In the grass, with birds singing and dancing around us,
To the music of the river, few meters away.

Good old days flashing by, breaking me
and making me, with the hope to regain everything.

Excited you were, knowing about the new boathouse.
People started coming to our place with papers and plans.

One of those days was the tragic incident.
Some guy walked to us, bent down and picked u.
You are beautiful, even he knew.

I was crying out loud to put u down.
“She is my universe, let her down”, I cried.
I am just a stone and he is an all-powerful human.
He couldn’t hear my cry for you.

You are thrown into the river, I saw the water splashing,
As you went down into a new world,
my whole world started shaking.

First, they cut down the tree. The birds stopped coming.
Then they poured concrete, kicking me aside.
Whole world changed here without you.

Lying alone in the small patch of sand,
Waiting for the next human hand.
When I read the title, i was intrigued and a different stoned came to my mind...
Could it be? I asked myself
Nah, dude has got more grey matter than he lets on, chided my brain
And in the end, my mind won, as always!
Amazingly written Carnie!!! 👏👏👏
A yearning so deep that could only be felt!
Stoned love indeed...
 

CarnivaL

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Thanks Marvel, unoda vocabulary kadan kodutha.. nalla panlam 🙂🙂
 

CarnivaL

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Nice 👏🏻
There are other stones in the sand, you just have to look. Besides, your beloved stone would definitely have found a rock by now 😏
Haha Mazhai, thanks..
That story has nothing to do with me.. chumma oru karpanai dhan !
I'm looking at 🌧 and waiting for 🌧 to look at me. Lol
 

Padhumai

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All dried up, going through days without shades
And nights with no warmth.

The routine was melancholy once,
With you next to me, under the big oak tree.

In the grass, with birds singing and dancing around us,
To the music of the river, few meters away.

Good old days flashing by, breaking me
and making me, with the hope to regain everything.

Excited you were, knowing about the new boathouse.
People started coming to our place with papers and plans.

One of those days was the tragic incident.
Some guy walked to us, bent down and picked u.
You are beautiful, even he knew.

I was crying out loud to put u down.
“She is my universe, let her down”, I cried.
I am just a stone and he is an all-powerful human.
He couldn’t hear my cry for you.

You are thrown into the river, I saw the water splashing,
As you went down into a new world,
my whole world started shaking.

First, they cut down the tree. The birds stopped coming.
Then they poured concrete, kicking me aside.
Whole world changed here without you.

Lying alone in a small patch of sand,
Waiting for the next human hand.
Stoned love... i thought it may be an emotion.. but totally unexpected... 😀

Nice carni... well written.. and apdi onnum periya story maari laam illa.. 😀
 
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